This is really good. I am not sure the distinctiobetween the two rings but not the other ring--it did call to mind the ring put in a cows nose, it brought to mind for me a sense of slavery. I only hope it's metaphorical or about sOmeone. Else. My world is so small right now I think everything is about me. And of course it is not. I think when the author writes in a way that let's us enter the poem, then it is well done indeed. And I entered in away that I don't want to be true, but I did think it was a powerful poem Lori!
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